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gZXXKCM学易试题碧工作室精心打造/<47需藕聂遨豫循线鹭0-0-占"'墨巧忘CrrJI【命题趋势】新高考英语科目考试题型有重大变化，其中英语写作分为两部分：第一节为应用文写作；第二节为读后续写或概要写作。应用文写作与往年的写作变化不是很大，已为广大师生所熟悉，但是第二节的读后续写或概要写作是一种新题型1.题型介绍选材特点（1）所需阅读的短文词数在350以内；（2）多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强。阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：（1）与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；（2）内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况；（3）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；（4）上下文的连贯性。【满分技巧】（1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右（词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分）；（2）应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。读后续写以读为辅，以写为主,其目标是考查学生的综合语言运用能力，主要包含以下四个方面：1 .把握短文关键值思和语言特点的能力；2 .语言运用的准确性和丰富性;3 .对语篇结构的把握能力；T学易试题碧工作室精心打造,4 .创造性思维能力。学检测训练（一）【新书面表达-续写作文】（2020届浙江杭州市长征中学高三上期中试题）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Therewasathickforestonthesidesofamountain.Manykindsofanimalslivedintheforest.Adeerwaseatinggrassandleaveswithhertwoyoungones.Theyoungoneswanderedhappilyhereandthere.Thedeerfollowedherfawns（幼鹿）intoacave.Thedeerwasfrightenedbecauseitwasatiger,scave.Therewerebonesofdeadanimalsalloverthecave.Fortunately,thetigerwasnotinsidethecaveatthetime.Thedeerwastryingtoleadheryoungonesoutofthecavewhensheheardaloudroar.Shesawthetigeratadistancecomingtowardsthecave.Itwasdangeroustogooutofthecavenow.Shethoughtofaplan.ThedeerraisedherVOiCeandshouted,"Mydeeryoungchildrendonotweep.IshallCaDtUre（捕捉）atigerforyoutoeat.Youcanhaveagooddinner."Thetigerheardthesewordsandbecamefrightened.Hethought,"Whoseisthatstrangevoicefromthecave?Adangerousanimalisstayinginsidetocaptureme.Ishallrunawaytoescapedeath."Thetigerbegantorunawayfromthereasfastaspossible.Ajackal（胡狼）sawtherunningtiger."Whyareyourunningingreatfear?"thejackalasked.Thetigersaid,"Myfriend,aDOWerfUIandfierceanimalisinmycave.Theyoungonesarecryingforatigertoeat.Themotherispromisingtocapturealigerforthem.So,Iamrunningaway."ThecunningjackalwasnowsurethetigerwasaCOWard（懦夫）.Itsaid,"Don'tbeafraid.NoanimalisfiercerorstrongerthanatigerLetusgotogethertofindout."Butthetigersaid,"Idonotwanttotakeachance.Youmayrunaway.Iwillbeleftalonetodie.So,Iwillnotcomewithyou."Thejackalsaid,"Trustme.Letusknot（才了结）ourtailstogether.ThenIwillnotbeabletoleaveyou."Thetigeragreedunwillinglytothisproposal.Sothejackaltiedtheirtailsinaknot.Nowtheywalkedtowardsthecavetogether.Para.1Thedeersawthejackalandthetigercomingtogether.Para.2Thetigerwasshockedtohearthisandhewassurenowthejackalcheatedhim【参考范文】Thedeersawthejackalandthetigercomingtogether.Sheagainraisedhervoice.Sheshoutedtowardsherchildrenstandinginsidethecave,"Mydearchildren,Irequestedmyfriend,thecleverjackal,tocaptureatigerIF.ZXXK.COMT学易试题碧工作室精心打造,forus.Nowlookthejackalhascapturedatigertorus.Hehastiedthetiger,stailtohistail.Thisistopreventthetigerfromescaping.Youwillsoonhavethetigerfordinner."Thetigerwasshockedtohearthisandhewassurenowthejackalcheatedhim.So,thetigerdecidedtoescapefromtheterribleanimalstandinginsidehiscave.Hestartedrunning.Heforgotaboutthejackal.Hedraggedthejackaloverrocksandthorns.Inthemadescapethejackalwascaughtbetweentworocks.Thetigerpulledwithallhismight.Histailgotcut.Thejackalwaskilledinthisincident.Thetail-lesstigerranawaytoanotherpartoftheforest.Thedeerandheryoungonesleftthetiger,scave.Theyjoinedtheirherdsafely.Presenceofmindandintelligencecansaveonefromdangeroussituations.（二）【新版书面表达-读后续写】（2020届新素养大二轮浙京津鲁琼版专题突破卷2）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。44Whatdoyouthinkaboutmyaudilion（试奏）yesterday?Mytri11（颤音）shouldhavebeenbelter,don,tyouthink?”AbbieaskedMeIandclosedtheIidofherviolincasebeforeschool."It'snobigdeal,Abbie,MelsaidastheyWaIkedoutthedoor.Meldidn,thavetimetoworryaboutherlittlesister,smood.Itturnedouttobeabusyday.Shehadatestinscienceclass.Shehittwohomerunsinsoftball.Afterschool,sheandherfriendstalkedabouttheirsummerplans.SheforgotabouttheauditionresultsuntilAbbiedraggedhertoIhemusicroom.Melthoughtshe,dprobablybein（hefirstviolins.MelandAbbiefoundthelistofnamesontheboard.AbbieConcerlmaster.Abbiescreamed,“Ican,tbelieveit!,ttIcan,twaittotellMumandDad!”Abbierushedtowardhome.Melkeptreading.Mel.Secondviolins.What?Therehadtobesomemistake.She,dfigureouttomorrow.WhenMelgothome,Abbiewasplayingherauditionpiecethere.MusicpouredfromAbbie,sbowlikewaterfromateapotpureandperfect.Andthetrillsoundedlikeabirdsinging.Abbiewasgood-reallygoodbutthatwasn,tthepointMrBensonmusthavemadeamistake,"Melthought.Thenextmorning,Melslippedintothemusicroom.Gatheringhercourage,Melsaid,“MrBenson,IwanttotalktoyouabouttheOrCheSlra（管弦乐队）seats.”44YesyoumustbeProUdofyoursister,''MrBensonsmiled.44Abbieisararestudent.IfshecontinuestoDraCtiCehardandgrowasamusician,shecouldbecomeaprofessional.Thenwe,lllookbackonourlittleorchestraandthinkabouthowluckyweare.”gZXXKCM学易试题碧工作室精心打造/注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Melfrozeastherewasn'tanymix-up.Paragraph2:Afterschool,MelfoundAbbieonabenchoutside,playingtheviolin.【参考范文】Melfrozeastherewasn,tanymix-up.Sherealizedshewastheonewho,dmadeamistake.Herlittlesisterhadearnedthefirstchairthrougheffortsandshehadn,tevencongratulatedher.Melwalkeddownthehall.Mostdays,shespenthertimethinkingaboutsoftball,herclassesandherfriends.Everydaywassofullthatshedidn'talwayspracticeherviolinwhileAbbieplayedeveryday.Determinedtomakeachange,MeldecidedtohaveatalkwithAbbie.Afterschool,MclfoundAbbieonabenchoutside,playingtheviolin.MelmadeuphermindtoapologizetoAhbieafterabriefinnerstruggle.Sheclearedherthroatandstarted,*4msoproudthatyou,reconcertmaster.msorryvebeensomean.IguessIwasjealous.Abbiewassurprised.tiButyou,repopular,Mel.Yougetbeltergrades.You'rebetteratsports.Youcandoeverything/'Melshookherhcad.vican'tmakeatrilllikeyoucan.”“Youcanifyoukeeppracticing."AbbiesmiledandaskedifMelwouldliketoplaywithher.Melagreeddelightedly.(三)【新书面表达-读后续写】(2019届浙江杭州地区高三冲刺模拟卷14)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Onceuponatime,therewasafarmercalledRipVanWinkle.HelivedinaViHageinthemountainswithhis学易试题碧工作室精心打造/wifeandtwoyoungchildren,adaughterandason.Ripwasaveryhappyandkindmanandhegotonwellwithall(hechildreninthevillage.TheylovedhimbecauseheplayedgameswiththemandoftenIoldthemStOrieSwhilehewassittingoutsidethe“KingGeorge,thevillageinn.HespendalotoftimeintheinnbecausehewasaveryIaZyman.Insteadofworkingonhisfarm,hewouldgofishingorhunting,orsitinthevillageinntalkingtohisfriends.Hisfamilywaspoorandhiswifeusedtogetangrywithhim.44Whatkindoffarmerareyou?”Shewouldsay."Whydon,tyougetdowntosomework,youlazyman!”Afterargumentswithhiswife,Ripalwayswentoffhuntingwithhisdog,Wolf.Oneday,afteranotherargumentRipwentfurtherthanusualinthewoodsandcametoabeautifulvalley.Suddenly,heheardastrangevoicecallinghisname.Anoldman,dressedinold-fashionedclothes,wastryingtocarryabarrel(木桶)andaskedRiptohelphim.Ripagreed.Theytookthebarreltoacave,wherethereweremorepeople,alldressedinthesamestrangeclothes.Aftertha,theoldmangaveRipadrinkfromthebarrel.Ripimmediatelyfellintoadeepsleep.注意：所续写的短文词数应为150左右；1 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；3 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paral:Sometimelater,hewokeupunderatreeinthesamevalley.Para2：Whenhegottohishouse,hesawthatitwasoldandabandoned.【参考范文】Comparedwithpapertowels,handdryershavemoreadvantages,whichwillbenefitschoolinfourways.First,theyarecleanandhealthybecausebacteriacan,ttouchkids.Additionally,itcanhelpschoolsavemoney.Thirdly,ourbathroomcanbekeptcleanandneat.Besides,itcandryourhandsmoreeffectivelyifwetakelongertime.Therefore,schoolisadvisabletofixtheequipmentatonce.(66)（四）（山东省2020年普通高等学校招生模拟卷）学易试题碧工作室精心打造/话题：救治流浪狗的故事难度：建议用时：7分阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Thoughitisoneofthefadedmemoriesofmylifetoday,therearetimeswhenIrememberhisfaceclearly,especiallyhiseyes.AshehadyellowspotsonhiseyeswecalledhimSpotty.Hewouldhavebeenastray（流浪）dog,untilhecametome.Iwassevenyearsold.MydadhadjustgotanewjobinNasik.Wehadmovedintoarentedhouse.Itwasrainingveryheavilyonthedaywemoved.Itwasacolddarknight.Wehadourmealandwenttosleep.SomehowinthemidnightIheardsomestrangesoundsoutsidethemaindoor.IgatheredcourageandlookedoutthroughthewindowandIwasreallyamusedwithwhatIsawoutside.Therewasasmallpuppylyingonanolddoormatwhichmymotherhadpuloutsidethedoor.Itwaswetandtrembling.Atfirstitwasdifficulttoseetheliteone.Itwastheyellowspotsonitseyesthatmademerealizeitspresence.ItwastryingtogetunderthedoormattoavoidthecoldairoutsideandithadmanagedtogetinasIcouldseeonlyitsheadoutsidethedoormat.Wasitsickorinjured?Ifeltpityforthepoorsoul.Iwentinandcameoutwithanoldtowel.Iwentneartheinnocentoneandhelditinmyhandandwipedthepuppytillhehadbecomedry.Ilookhimintomyroomandmadeabedforhimwithawoolenblanketandasmallpillow.Heseemedveryhealhyandcomfortableinhisnewbedashewenttosleepimmediately.Thenextmorning,everyoneinthefamilycametoknowabouttheunusualguestitShallwekeephimwithus?"Iquestionedmymom.1.ikeanyotherparentswould,myparentsfirsttallyrefusedmyideabutmysisterandIconvincedthemtokeepSpotty.SlowlySpottygotonwitheveryoneandbecameoneofthefamilymembers.Para.1：Oneday,Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg.4科内力利,让依西专引上不超帛!Para.2:Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.【参考范文】DayspassedonandoneeveningwhenSpottyreturnedfromhislongwalk,heappearedveryexhausted.Hecametomyroomandsatnearme.ItwasthenthatIsawhishindlegwasinjuredandwasbleeding.Icalledoutmymotherandshequicklytiedabandagearoundhislegandgavehimfoodtoeat.Iwasveryupset.Butthenextday,Spottywasuptohisusualpranksthoughhelimpedabit.AfterthisincidentmyrelationwithSpottybecamemoreintense.Ireallyadmiredhimalotforhiscourage.Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.Wecameoutandsawthathewasbarkingcontinuouslyheadingsomewhere.AftersometimeSpottybecamequiet.Ipattedhimonhisbackandcameinside.Thenextdaymorning,myheartskippedabeatwhenIdidn'tseeSpotty.Isearchedforhimineachandeverycornerbuthewasnowhere.Andthistimehehadgoneandwouldnevercomeback.Icriedandwaitedforhim.Wewaitedforonelongweek.Buttherewerenosignsofhim.ThenonedaymyDadgottransferredtoMumbai.WeshiftedbacktoMumbai.WhatwouldhavehappenedtoSpotty?Wouldhehavedied?Theseweretheonlyquestionsinmymind,buttheyallremainedunansweredforever.（五）（2020届新素养大二轮浙京津鲁琼版专题突破卷2）话题：Abbie和Mel之间发生的关于乐队的故事难度：建议用时：7分阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。44Whatdoyouthinkaboutmyaudition（试奏）yesterday?Mytri11（颤音）shouldhavebeenbetter,don,tyouthink?”AbbieaskedMelandclosedthelidofherviolincasebeforeschool."It'snobigdeal,Abbie,MelsaidastheyWaIkedoutthedoor.Meldidn'thavetimetoworryaboutherlittlesister'smood.Itturnedouttobeabusyday.Shehadatestinscienceclass.Shehittwohomerunsinsoftball.Afterschool,sheandherfriendstalkedabouttheirsummerplans.SheforgotabouttheauditionresultsuntilAbbiedraggedhertothemusicroom.Melthoughtshe'dprobablybeinthefirstviolins.学易试题碧工作室精心打造/MelandAbbiefoundthelistofnamesontheboard.AbbieConcertmaster.Abbiescreamed,“Ican,tbelieveit!''"Ican,twaittotellMumandDad!''Abbierushedtowardhome.Melkeptreading.Mel.Secondviolins.What?Therehadtobesomenistake.She,dfigureouttomorrow.WhenMelgothome,Abbiewasplayingherauditionpiecethere.MusicpouredfromAbbie,sbowlikewaterfromateapot-pureandperfect.Andthetrillsoundedlikeabirdsinging.Abbiewasgoodreallygood-butthatwasn'tthepoint.ttMrBensonmusthavemadeamistake,''Melthought.Thenextmorning,Melslippedintothemusicroom.Gatheringhercourage,Melsaid,MrBenson,IwanttotalktoyouabouttheOrCheStra（管弦乐队）seats.”ttYesyoumustbeDrOUdofyoursister,''MrBensonSmiIed."AbbieisarareStudentJfshecontinuestoDraCliCehardandgrowasamusician,shecouldbecomeaprofessional.Thenwe,lllookbackonourlittleorchestraandthinkabouthowluckyweare.”注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:MelfrozeasthereWaSn'Ianymix-up.Paragraph2:Afterschool,MelfoundAbbieonabenchoutside,playingtheviolin.【背诵范文】Melfrozeastherewasn,tanymix-up.Sherealizedshewastheonewho,dmadeamistake.Herlittlesisterhadearnedthefirstchairthrougheffortsandshehadn,tevencongratulatedher.Melwalkeddownthehall.Mostdays,shespenthertimethinkingaboutsoftball,herclassesandherfriends.Everydaywassofullthatshedidn'talwayspracticeherviolinwhileAbbieplayedeveryday.Determinedtomakeachange,MeldecidedtohaveatalkwithAbbie.学易试题碧工作室精心打造/Afterschool,MelfoundAbbieonabenchoutside,playingtheviolin.MelmadeuphermindtoapologizetoAbbieafterabriefinnerstruggle.Sheclearedherthroatandstarted,t*msoproudthatyou,reconcertmaster.msorryvebeensomean.IguessIwasjealous.Abbiewassurprised.4tButyou,repopular,Mel.Yougetbeltergrades.You,rebetteratsports.Youcandoeverything?'Melshookherhead."Ican,tmakeatrilllikeyoucan."44Youcanifyoukeeppracticing.AbbiesmiledandaskedifMeiwouldliketoplaywithher.Melagreeddelightedly.（六）（2019届浙江杭州地区高三冲刺模拟卷14）话题：农民RipVanWinkle的故事难度：建议用时：7分阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Onceuponatime,therewasafarmercalledRipVanWinkle.HelivedinaViHageinthemountainswithhiswifeandtwoyoungchildren,adaughterandason.Ripwasaveryhappyandkindmanandhegotonwellwithallthechildreninthevillage.TheylovedhimbecauseheplayedgameswiththemandoftenIOldthemStorieSwhilehewassittingoutsidethe“KingGeorge*,thevillageinn.HespendalotoftimeintheinnbecausehewasaveryIaZyman.Insteadofworkingonhisfarm,hewouldgofishingorhunting,orsitinthevillageinntalkingtohisfiiends.Hisfamilywaspoorandhiswifeusedtogetangrywithhim.44Whatkindoffarmerareyou?”Shewouldsay.“Whydon,tyougetdowntosomework,youlazyman!”Afterargumentswithhiswife,Ripalwayswentoffhuntingwithhisdog,Wolf.Oneday,afteranotherargumentRipwentfurtherthanusualinthewoodsandcametoabeautifulvalley.Suddenly,heheardastrangevoicecallinghisname.Anoldman,dressedinold-fashionedclothes,wastryingtocarryabarrel（木桶）andaskedRiptohelphim.Ripagreed.Theytookthebarreltoacave,wherethereweremorepeople,alldressedinthesamestrangeclothes.Afterthat,theoldmangaveRipadrinkfromthebarrel.Ripimmediatelyfellintoadeepsleep.注意：所续写的短文词数应为150左右；1 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；3 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paral：IF.ZXXK.COM学易试题碧工作室精心打造/Sometimelater,hewokeupunderatreeinthesamevalley.Para2:Whenhegottohishouse,hesawthatitwasoldandabandoned.【背诵范文】Comparedwithpapertowels,handdryershavemoreadvantages,whichwillbenefitschoolinfourways.First,theyarecleanandhealthybecausebacteriacan'ttouchkids.Additionally,itcanhelpschoolsavemoney.Thirdly,ourbathroomcanbekeptcleanandneat.Besides,itcandryourhandsmoreeffectivelyifwetakelongertime.Therefore,schoolisadvisabletofix(heequipmentatonce.(66)