读后续写溜冰和脱险公开课教案教学设计课件资料.docx

读后续写XX写作阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写题目Wrappingpaperxxx×everywhereasxxxxopenedhergift.×××boxhadapictureofaprettygirl.Shewaswearingwhiteiceskatesandturningaroundafrozenpond.××××lookedupatherxxxxandunclewithherbigbrowneyes.zzFigureskates?Wow!Howniceofyou!But/xxxlittlegirlhesitated,".butIdon'tknowhowtoskate."Shelookedembarrassed."Don'tworry/saidxxxxLisa."That'sthefunpartlearninghowtodoit!”"That'sright/saidUncleGeorge."Wewilltakeyoutotheicerink（冰场）andallgoskatingtogether.t,don'tknow.”saidCali.Shewasn'ttoosureshewasgoingtobeabletodoit.Sometimesshehadahardtimelearningnewthings.Shelookedagainatthehappygirlonthebox.Itdidlooklikefun.Caliimaginedherselfmovingandturningontheicelikearealfigureskater.zzOkay/sheagreed,zlet,sdoit!”×××nextdayCaliwenttotheskatingrinkwithherauntanduncle.Hereyestwinkledandherfacelitupwithexcitementasshelookedattheotherskatersaroundher.Shesatdownonthebenchandslippedherfeetintotheskates.Holdingthestringsinherfingers,shecouldnotfigureouthowtotiethemup.,don'tknowhowtodoit/shesaid.Shefeltsadthatthiswasanotherthingshecouldn'tdo.“Letmeshowyou."Herauntbentdownononeknee,explaininghowtoputthestringsaroundthesmallhooks（钩子）Thenshetiedthemintoatightbow."Now,youdotheotherskateyourself.Illhelpyouifyouneedit."Calibentovertheskateanddidwhatheraunthadshowedher.Hertonguestuckoutofthesideofhermouthasshepaidattention.Afterafewtries,sheworkedouthowtocrossthestringsaroundthehooks.Heraunthelpedmakesurethestringswerexxxxandtight.zzYoudidit!”smiledheraunt,pattingCaliontheback.Paragraph1:zzTimetohittheice/herunclesaid.Paragraph2:Oof!Shefelldown,hard.范文一“Timetohittheice/herunclesaid.LegstremblingandpalmsSWeating（独立主格）,Caliputoneofherfeetcautiouslyonthesmoothsurfaceoftherink."Don'tworry!Wewillholdyourhandsandyoustandbetweenus."Caligraduallygrabbedtheirhandsandmadeherfirststepontothesmoothice.Shegrinned（咧嘴笑着）andtriedtakingafewsteps.zzGoodzCali.Nowtrytoglide（滑）forabitlonger/suggestedheraunt.Thenheruncleskatedinfrontofherwhileherauntguidedherfrombehind.wSkatetoyourunclenow/shesaid,pushingheronthebackalittletogetmorespeed.Caliglidedunsteadilytowardsheruncle,takingsmallstepsandfightingforbalance（分词做伴随）.Atthatmoment,askaterwaszoomingpasther.Shestartedtogetnervousagainandlostherbalance.（就在那时，一个溜冰者从她身边疾驰而过,她又开始紧张，失去了平衡。）Oof!Shefelldown,hard.（4）Ithurtsomuch.Sheclosedhereyesandtriednottocrybuttearsrolleddownhercheeksuncontrollably.Aunt/swordsechoinginhermind（独立主格结构），Calistruggledtoherfeetandxxxxadeepbreathzdeterminedtogiveitanothertry"Bebrave.Keepgoing.Smallsteps.Yes!,Minutestickingaway（时间滴滴答答地流逝），shecouldskatealmostallthewayaroundtherinkbyherself!Herauntcaughtuptoherandxxx×herhand.zzLookatyou!Youareworkingsohardanddoingsowell.We'reproudofyou/Withasenseoffulfillmentwellingupfromherbottom（with结构）zCalihadtastedthecharmoflearningnewthingsforthefirsttime.××דTimetohittheice/herunclesaid.Ashehelpedherwalktotheedgeoftherinkzhesaid,zzWewillholdyourhandsandyoustandbetweenus."Cali××××theirhandsinhersandmadeherfirststepontothesmoothice.Shegrinnedandtriedtakingafewsteps.,zGood,Cali.Nowtrytoglideononefootforjustasecondlongeroneachfootasyouwalk/suggestedheraunt.Thenheruncleskatedinfrontofherwhileherauntguidedherfrombehind.zzSkatetoyourunclenow"shesaid,pushingheronthebackalittletogetmorespeed.Caliglidedunsteadilytowardsheruncle,takingsmallstepsandfightingforbalance.Whenshereachedheruclezheencouragedhertotryitonherown.Caliwasn'ttoosureaboutthat.Itseemedlikeeveryoneelsewaszoomingpasther.Shestartedtogetnervous.Shelostherbalance.Oof!Shefelldown,hard.Ithurt.Sheclosedhereyesandtriednottocry.Inamoment,herunclewashelpingherbackonfeet.Hesmiledintohereyes.zzEveryonefallsdownthefirstfewtimes.Youjusthavetogetbackupagain."Calitookadeepbreath.“Okay,Icandothis."Sheskatedawayfromheruncletowardthecrowd.Asshewobbled,shetalkedtoherself.zzBebrave.Keepgoing.Smallsteps.Yes!”Shehadskatedalmostallthewayaroundtherinkbyherself!HerauntcaughtuptoherandtookherhadLookatyou!Youareworkingsohardanddoingsowell.Wezreproudofyou/said×x××Lisa.续写题目阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。"Gocheckouttheicewhilewegobackandgetthegoal."IcanremembermyteenagefriendssayingthatastheydroppedmeoffbytheedgeofxxxxxPondinFortSalonga.GrowinguponLongIslandinthe1960sand1970s,myfriendsandIcouldn'twaitforschoolbreakbetweenChristmasandthenewyear.Itwastimetogetouttheiceskatesandplayhockey.BackthenzinDecember,manypondsandlakeswouldfreeze.OneofmyfavoriteswasBlanchardLakeiNorthport7orwhatwecalled"thecove."Itwouldgettoocrowded,though,sowe,dgotoCenterport'sMillPond,whichlookedlikedeepwater;butitwasn't.xxx×tothatmorningwhenIwasdroppedoffat×××××Pond.MyfriendsandIrealizedthatweforgottobringthegoaltoshootthexxxx（冰球）into,sowhiletheywentback,Iwasgoingtotesttheice.Istartedalongtheedgeandfeltitwassolid.Wehadjusthadacoldsnap（寒流）forafewdays,soIdidn'tthinktherewouldbeanyproblem.AsIriskedfartherout,theicegotcleareranditwasexcitingtoseeunderwaterplantsundertheice.Suddenly,Iheardamassivecrackingsoundthatseemedtobeallaroundme.Iinstinctivelybenttomykneestonotbreakthroughtheicelikeastraighttorpedo（鱼雷）.ItwastoolateBeforeIknewit,Iwasinthewaterwithjustmyheadstickingoutandmyarmswavingwhilestillholdingmyhockeystick.Noonewasaroundexceptonepersonatthefarendofthepondwhocouldn'thearmycriesforhelp.Iwasshortofbreathwhiletryingtosolvemycrisis.Paragraph1:Usingallmystrength,Ihammeredthecuttingedgeofmystickintotheiceaheadofme.Paragraph2:×××danger,however;wasn'tover.Paragraph1：Usingallmystrength,Ihammeredthecuttingedgeofmystickintotheiceaheadofme.Itworked,forawhile.AsIstruggledtoclimbbackup,thesoundofacrackpiercedthroughmyearsandheart.Holdingthesticktightly,Ifroze,icycurrentsnumbingmybodyandwashingmyhopeaway.Everysecondpastwasatorturewiththesensationofmyextremitiesrobbedbythecold.Finally,atthemomentwhenIbegantoloseconsciousnessandgripofthestick,Iheardthemostwonderfulsound,myfriendscallingmyname.Paragraph2：Thedanger;howeverwasn'tover.AfterIrespondedwithmytremblingvoice,theycarefullywalkedtowardsme.xxxthepressurethatcamewithapproachingstepsbecomethelaststraw.Withaloudcrack,thestickfellandmyheartsank.Unwillingtosurrender;IsqueezedhoweverinfinitesimalstrengthIhadinmeandswamtowardsmyfriendswhiletheylayontheground,feetinhands,withmyfriendatfrontreachingdangerouslyanddesperatelyoutforme.Onthatcoldestdayofmylife,Iwasluckyenoughtohavecaughtthewarmestthingmyfriend'shand.