生活与学习（读后续写话题之人与自我）公开课教案教学设计课件资料.docx

专题07生活与学习（人与自我）【考情分析】XXXX主题话题2023新高考I卷人与自我之个人成长我被鼓励参加写作比赛2023浙江1月卷人与自然之人与动物我与蜂鸟的神奇邂逅2022新高考I&II卷人与自我之个人成长鼓励残疾男孩参加越野跑2022浙江6月卷人与社会之善行义举为无家可归者发放食物2022浙江1月卷人与自我之个人成长与“最不合拍”搭档成为好友2021新高考I&II卷人与社会之亲情关爱母亲节的惊喜2021浙江6月卷人与社会之善行义举帮助别人度过难关2021浙江1月卷人与社会之故事+遇险男孩意外卡住头而走红网络【写作指导】生活与成长的主题涉及内容：在学校的课程，同学之间的交往，学校、班级举行的课外活动或各项比赛，如春游、野餐、聚会等，还包括学生的衣着、发型、复习、讨论、归纳等学习活动或教师的教学方等。具体写作过程如下：1.读懂原文，划分要素（记叙文六要素）2读透首句，确定情节发展（梳理故事情节和发展脉络，提炼故事主要事件）3 .列出大纲，紧扣主题个人成长（突出改变和成长，如：克服困难、克服自卑等）4 .写出句式，句句升级（多变句式如：定语从句、名词性从句、强调句、非谓语短语等灵活运用）5 .检查错误，书写优美（字迹工整，检查时态、语法、单词拼写等错误）【素材宝库】词汇积累（名词类）campus校园lecturetheatre阶梯教室canteen餐厅laboratory/labx××dininghall食堂teachingbuilding教学楼dormitory××theStudents'Unionx×xXXXX俱乐部achievement/result成绩competition竞赛marks/grades/scores分数rewards奖励schooldininghall学校食堂outing交B游graduationceremony毕业典礼part-timejobs兼职holdasportsmeeting举行运动会campus校园voluntarylabor义务劳动lecturetheatre阶梯教室physicalactivities体育活动（动词短语类）preparelessons备课putone'sheartinto专心于workoutxxxcheatintheexam考试作弊havelessons上课getfullmarksfor.得满分learn.byheart熟记，背诵prepareforlessons预习功课keep.inmindt己住passtheexamination通过考试missalesson误一节课haveagoodx×x×x×xof精通workhardat努力做(学)concentrateon全神贯注于stayawayfromSChOOl旷课makeprogressin.取得进步haveapicnic/barbecue去野餐/烧烤fail(in)thetest测验不及格socialpractice社会实践extracurricularactivities课外活动preparelessons备课putone'sheartinto专心于layasolidfoundationin在方面打下坚实的基础winfirstprizeinmathscompetition获得数学竞赛一等奖式积累1 .Iprefertofailratherthancheatintheexam.我宁愿考不及格,也不愿意考试作弊。2 .mdeterminedtodowellinmylessonssoasnottoletmyparentsdown.为了不让我的父母失望,我决心把功课学好。3 .Recentlywehavehadaheateddiscussionastowhetherweshouldhavetermexams.最近,我们就是否应该进行学期考试进行了激烈的讨论。4 .Theextracurricularactivityisanecessarypartoftheschoollives.课外活动是学校生活不可缺少的一环。5 .Therearevarietiesofout-of-classactivitiesinourschool,whichwecantakepartinafterclass.我们学校有多种多样的课外活动,我们课后可以参加。6 .Themeetingwillbeheldonthefirstflooroftheschoollibraryandlasttendays,fromJuneIOthto20th.这次会议将在学校图书馆一楼举行,持续10天,从6月10日至20日。7 .Afterlonghoursofstudy,studentscanrelaxbothphysicallyandmentallybytakingpartinschoolactivities.参加学校活动，学生们可以在长时间学习之后身心放松。8 .Notonlycantheactivitybroadenourhorizons,butalsodevelopourinterestinscience.这次活动中不仅不仅开阔了我们的视野,而且培养了对科学的兴趣。9 .Asastudent,Iamstronglyfortheactivitybecauseitismeaningfulandhelpful.作为一名学生,我坚决支持这次活动,因为它既有意义又有帮助。10 .SofarwehavecarriedoutavarietyofactivitiesonEnglishlearning,suchaswatchingEnglishfilms,holdingaChristmasparlyandgettingtogetherwithforeignstudents.到目前为止,关于英语学习我们已经进行了多种多样的活动,如观看英文电影、举行圣诞晚会以及与外国学生聚会等。语积累1. Everyminutecounts.分秒必争。2. Itisnevertoooldtolearn.活到老学到老。3. Thereisnoendtolearning.学无止境。4. Artislong,butlifeisshort.人生有限,学问无涯。/人生有限,艺术无穷。/人生有限，学海无涯。5. Ayoungidler,anoldbeggar.少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。6. Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的开端是成功的一半。7. Knowledgestartswithpractice.实践出真知。8. Thereisnoroyalroadtolearning.学问无坦途。/书山有路勤为径,学海无涯苦作舟.9. Complacencyistheenemyofstudy.自满是学习的敌人。10. Alittleknowledgeisadangerousthing.i知半解，害己误人。11. Abookthatremainsshutisbutabrick.书本不常翻，犹如一块砖。12. Successbelongstothepersevering坚持就是胜利。13. Booksandfriendsshouldbefewbutgood.读书如交友，应求少而精。14. Knowledgeadvancesbystepsnotbyleaps.知识的获得是循序渐进而不是突飞猛进的。15. AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只工作，不玩耍，聪明小伙也变傻。16. Amanbecomeslearnedbyaskingquestions.不耻下问才能获得学问。17. Amancannotspinandreelatthesametime.一心不能二用。18. Readingistothemindwhileexercisetothebody.读书健脑，运动强身。19. Knowledgemakeshumble,ignorancemakesproud.博学使人谦逊，无知使人骄傲。1 0.ByreadingWeenrichthemind,byconversationwepolishit.读书使人充实，交谈使人精明。21 .Agoodbookisabestfriendwhoneverturnshisbackuponus.好书如挚友，永远不相负。22 .Foolslearnnothingfromwisemen,butwisemenIeammuchfromfools.愚者不学无术，智者不耻下问。23 .Thereisnoroyalroadtolearning.书山有路勤为径,学海无涯苦作舟。万能写作模板阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。SherryAnneLipskiwasbornandraisedinNewYorkCity.Sherrylovedthecity.Itwasherhome.Andmostofherclosestfriendslivedjustafewblocksaway.Shecouldcallanyofthemand,inminutes,theycouldgathertogetherattheicecreamshop,pizzaplace,oroneofthelocalplaygrounds.WhenSherry'sfriendsgotamessagefromhertomeetattheplayground,theyknewwhatshewantedtodo:playhandball.Americanhandballisapopulargame,mostoftenplayedincities,especiallyNewYork.Itiskindofliketennisexceptthereisnonet.Sherrycouldplayhandballforhoursandhours.Withthatmuchpractice,shebecamethebestplayerinherentireneighborhood,winningeverytimeshewalkedontoacourt.Herfriendswouldchallengeher,eventhoughknowingthattheywoulddefinitelylose,butplayedanywayjusttohavesomefun.Towardtheendofherfourthgrade,herparentstoldSherrysomeveryupsettingnews.ttShcrry,hermotherbegan,worriedthatherdaughtermightcry."Yourfatherhasbeengivenawonderfulnewjobbythecompanyheworksfor.4tYes,Sherry,herfatheradded.t4mveryexcitedaboutit.It,sapromotion,whichmeanswecanhaveamuchmorecomfortablelifetogether.,"OK"Sherrywasunsurewhytheywerespeakingtoherinsuchawaywhenitsoundedlikegoodnews.Thenitbecameclear.44Unfbrtunately,hermothersaid,t4wehavetomovetoPennsylvaniawhereyourfatherhasbeenaskedtowork.”“Weknowthatyou,11missyourNewYorkhome,Shey,saidherdad.44Butyou,reawonderfulyounglady.Weknowyouwillmakesomenewfriendsthere.Sherrybegantocryrightaway.Herparentscomfortedher,bulshedrownedherselfinsadness,especiallywhenshethoughtofsayinggoodbyetoallofherchildhoodfriendsandtheneighborhoodwhereshegrewup.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Monthslater.Sherrywasstilldepressedbecauseshemissedherhometown.“Really?”Sherrywasgettingexcited.【答案】Monthslater,Shenywasstilldepressedbecauseshemissedherhometown.Shefoundthathernewcitywasaniceplaceandtheotherkidsatschoolapproachedherfriendly.Still,itdidnotfeellikeherhome.Shewasinlowspiritsandwouldnotgooutanylonger,whichworriedherparentsalot.OnedayherschoolmateTaraaskedheratlunchtime,"Sherry,whatdoyouliketodoforfUn?”Sherryshookherhead,assumingthatnoneofherpeersherewouldknowhowtoplayhandball.uIlikeplayingtennis.Youmustlikesomething!”Tarasaidwithabrightsmile.“Youplaytennis?Sherrycouldn'tbelieveherears.tYes!IamabigfanOfit.”,Really?”Sherrywasgettingexcited.Shethoughtthatmaybe,justmaybe,ifsheshowedTarahowtoplayhandball,shecouldfinallyfindthemotivationtogooutsideagain.Afterschool,SherrytaughtTaraalltherules.“That'seasytoplay!”Tarasaid.ttIt'sjustliketennis!,Tarawasnotverygoodatitatfirst,butwithherabilitytoplaytennis,shemadestunningprogress.Theyplayedfortwohoursuntiltheyhadtogohome.t4llbeatyousomeday!,TarashoutedatSherryastheydeparted,inafriendlytone.44Let,swaitandsee,“Sherryrepliedwithgreatjoy,realizingthatshemadeanewbestfriend.【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了出生并生长的纽约的雪莉非常喜欢这座城市，她可以和朋友们起玩手球。但四年级时因为爸爸工作的调动，她和妈妈不得不跟着一起搬到宾夕法尼亚州。想到要和朋友们离别，雪莉很伤心。【详解】1.段落续写：根据第一段首句“几个月后，雪莉仍然很沮丧，因为她想念家乡”可知，卜.文可描写在她情绪低落时遇到了一个和她一样爱好打球的同学。根据第二段首句“'真的吗?雪莉开始兴奋起来”可知，下文可描写雪莉教刚认识的同学打手球，她们经常一起练习，成为了朋友。2 .续写线索：雪莉想念家乡一同学主动接触了解到同学也喜欢球类一雪莉很兴奋教同学打手球常常一起练习成为朋友不再孤单3 .词类激活行为类知道：find/know使担心：worryconcem打败：beat/defeat回答：rcplyrespond情绪类情绪低落：beinlowspirits/feeldown/feelblue友好的：friendly/kind/nice/pleasant【点睛】高分句型IShewasinlowspiritsandwouldnotgooutanylonger,whichworriedherparentsalot.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）高分句型2Shethoughtthatmaybe,justmaybe,ifsheshowedTarahowtoplayhandball,shecouldfinallyfind（hemotivationtogooutsideagain.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）高分句型3“LerSwaitandsee,“Sherryrepliedwithgreatjoy,realizingthatshemadeanewbestfriend.（运用了现在分词作状语，和that引导的宾语从句）高考真题】1.（2023全国统考高考真题）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:t4BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou,rewillingtoapplyyourselfIthinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis."Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.IchosePaulRevere,shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith（银匠）inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse,smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse,schoice.Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.1wantedtoquit.But,likeRevere,shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.IcheckedoutahalfdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,44Great.Now,writeitagain.”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn'twin,Iwouldn'tcare.注意：1 .续写词数应为150个左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.Iwenttomyteacher,soficeaftertheawardpresentation.Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.IwasinformedthatIwonthefirstprizeinIhewritingcontestandthattherewouldbeanawardpresentationintwodays.IwasSohappytohearthenewsthatIimmediatelyshareditwithmyteacher.tIknewyou,dwin!Iamproudofyou.Youmadeil!”hesaidexcitedly.Thencamethebigday.When1wasinvitedtothestagetoreceivetheaward,Iexpressedmythankstomyteacher.Isaid,"It'syouwhomakemefallinlovewithwriting,mysocialstudiesteacher.Withoutyourrecognitionandguidance,Icouldn'thavewrittenthisarticle.Againthankyouverymuch!”Iwenttomyteacher,sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.Myteacherwaswaitingforme.Holdingmyhands,hesaidltCongratulations!Youareagoodwriter,sokeepwriting."ttYouknowIdidn,tlikewritingbefore,butnowIamcrazyaboutit!Iwilltrymybesttocreategoodworks/'Isaidseriously.Sincethen,IhavewrittenmanygoodworksandnowIamafamouswriter.Iowemysuccesstomysocialteacherwhoisabeaconinmylifeontheroadtowriting.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者上中学的时候，社会学老师邀请作者参加一个写作比赛。作者不喜欢写作，于是想都没想就拒绝了。但是在老师的鼓励下，作者同意试试。作者在写作过程中虽然很累，但是没有放弃，坚持下来了。在作者最终完成写作时，作者感到写作让他很快乐，他已经不在乎输赢了。【详解】1.段落续写：由第段首句内容“几个星期后，当我几乎忘记比赛的时候，传来了消息。”和第二段首句“颁奖后我去了老师的办公室。“可知，第一段可描写作者获得比赛一等奖，在颁奖典礼上作者表达了对社会老师的感激。由第二段首句内容“颁奖后我去了老师的办公室。”可知，第二段可描写老师鼓励作者继续写作，自此作者坚持写作取得了成功，作者将这一切归功于自己的老师。2 .续写线索：比赛消息传来作者获奖高兴颁奖典礼感谢老师颁奖后来到老师办公室老师告诉作者坚持写作作者表达了对写作的喜爱一作者写作取得了成功感激老师3 .词汇激活行为类告知：inform/tell成功做到：makeit/SUCCeed表达：express/convey情绪类高兴的：happy/glad激动地：excitedlywi（hexcitement【点睛】高分句型1IwasinformedthatIwonthefirstprizeinthewritingcontestandthattherewouldbeanawardpresentationintwodays.（运用了由连接词that引导的宾语从句）高分句型2IrSyouwhomakemefallinlovewithwriting,mysocialstudiesteacher.（运用了强调句）高分句型3IowemysuccesstomysocialteacherwhoisabeaconinmylifeontheroadtoWriIing.（运用了who引导的限制性定语从句）【名校模拟题提升练】1. （2023湖南长沙雅礼中学校考三模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Billywas15yearsoldthen.Hegrewupinaverypoorneighborhood.Nooneinhisfamilyhadgonetocollegebefore.Actually,fewpeoplearoundhimhadreceivedhighereducation.Theyallstruggledtoliveagoodlife.Therefore,Billyknewnothingaboutcollegesorscholarshipsandheneverthoughthewouldgotocollegeoneday.Althoughhewasasmartboy,hedidn,tstudyhardatschoolandoftengotintotroublewithotherteenagersinhisneighborhood.Oneday,whileBillywaswalkingontheplayground,aboyofhisagestartedmakingfunofhim.ThenthatboypushedhimhardandBillyfellonto（heground.Billybecamesoangrythathestoodupandbeatthatboy.Soafightbegan.IthappenedthatBilly'sEnglishteacherMr.Smithwaswalkingnearby.Heimmediatelyrantotheboystostopthefight.Billywasabitworriedbecauseheknewhisteacherwasverystrictwithstudents.Hewasafraidhisteacherwouldpunishhim.However,tohisastonishment,histeacherdidn,tdothat.4Billy,let,shaveatalk,“saidhisteacher.Billy,notknowingwhathisteacherwantedtodo,wasveryworried.Buthenodded.Sotheywenttoabenchnearbyandsatdown.Aftertheysatdown,Mr.Smithbegan,tBilly,Iknowyou'reasmartboy,butyou,rewastingyourlifenow.Whydon,tyoustudyhardtogotocollegesothatyoucanchangeyourlifeandhaveabrightfuture?"Hearingthat,Billydidn'tknowwhattosay.Hehadneverthoughtaboutit.Billywasinsilence.Mr.Smithcontinued,tIknowyoumayhaveneverthoughtaboutgoingtocollege.Buteverythingispossible.WhenIwasatyourage,Iwasatroublemakerjustlikeyouandneverthoughtdbeabletogotocollege,either.ItwasallbecauseofthesupportandencouragementofMr.Howard,mymathteacherinhighschool.”注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1:Then,Mr.SmithbegantotellBillyhisstory.Paragraph2:BillywasgreatlytouchedbyM?:Smithsstory.【答案】ThenMr.SmithbegantotellBillyhisstory.uAtthattime,IusuallyskippedclassesandeveryteacherwasseeminglyusedtothatexceptMrHoward.Hearrestedmeagainandagain,sofinallyIyieldedincaseofmeetinghisdisappointedeyes.Andhenoticedmychangeandtalkedwithmeaboutfuturepatiently.ItwasthefirsttimeIhadheardsomebodywhoadvisedmetofurthermyeducationandIbegantostudyhardtobeadmittedintoacollegewiththehelpofscholarship.AndfinallyImadeit.”BillywasgreatlytouchedbyMr.Smithsstory.Sohebegantolistentotheteacherscarefullyinclassandfinishhishomeworkbyhimself.Fortunately,Mr.Smithwaswillingtohelphimmakeupwhathemissedbeforeandotherteacherswereallgladtoseehischangeandanswerhisquestionwithpatience.Eventually,withBilly,seffortandhisteachers,support,hewasadmittedintoafamouscollegeandbecameadoctor.2.（2023河北衡水衡水市第二中学校考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Earlyinmyteachingcareer,Iheardcountlessexcusesforwhystudentsdidn,thandintheirhomework.Astimepassed,IquitacceptinganyexcuseotherthanaVerifiable（能证实的）deathinthefamily.WhenIwastransferredtoaninner-citymiddleschool,Itookmyno-nonsenseattitudewithme.,Noexcuses,noextensions!ttIwarnedmyeighthgradersonthefirstdayofschool.Icollectedhomeworkatthebeginningofeachclass.Whenastudentdidn,thaveit,Ineveraskedwhy.Instead,Isighedloudly,shookmyheadandwiththestudentlookingonrecordedazerointhegradebook.IsoongainedthereputationIthoughtIwanted.Then,oneafternoon,shortlyafterthedismissalbellrang,Anthonyapproachedme.,CouldItalktoyouaminute?”heaskedshyly,nottakinghiseyesoffthefloor.,Iknowyousaiditdoesn'tmatterwhywedon,thaveourlessonsdone,butIdon,twantyoutothinkmalazystudentbecauseIcometoschoolwithoutmyhomeworksooften."Anthonylookedupatmeforthefirsttime,andIcouldseethathiseyeswereWatering."It'sjustthatmydadmovedout,andmymomwaitstablesatnight,soIhavetotakecareofmylittlebrothers.Sometimestheycryalot,anditmakesithardtoconcentrate/4IputmyhandonAnthony,sthinShoUIder."Whyareyoujustnowtellingme"Istoppedinmid-sentence.Iknewwhy.SoIchangedthequcstion.uWouldithelpifyoustayedhereinmyclassroomafterschoolandworkedonitbeforeyougohome?Heswallowedhardandnodded.Thenextday,Iannouncedtoallmystudentsthatdbeofferinganafter-schoolstudyhallMondaythroughFriday.注意：1.续写词数应为50左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Anthonywasthefirststudenttoshowup.IlearnedalotfromthecaseofAnthony.【答案】Anthonywasthefirststudenttoshowup.Acoupleofdayslater,anotherstudentjoinedhim.Beforelong,Ihadaroomfullofeig